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Post by Kadey Sewell on Aug 10, 2010 3:29:41 GMT -8
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full name | Kadey is in actual fact an alien and her real name is Kade'ligha Sali-yull but here on Earth she is currently under the name Kadey Meredydd Sewell nicknames & titles | Kad, Merrry, Wild Child, age | Kadey is roughly 800 years old and is still considered young for her species but to the outside eye she appears to be in her late twenties early thirties, if asked to put a number she would say she is twenty eight. sexuality | heterosexual, she's only interested in guys species | Alien: Changeling Changelings are an ancient race who have kept the bond between beast and human, because of this link they are able to change their form into any animal and can change their 'human' appearance. Through years of honing their skills they have also been able to make subtle changes, for example making their skin as rough as a rhino. This ability makes them masters of disguise and because of their constant shifting they are hard to kill; they are quick, agile and have a hard exterior and a accelerated healing rate [thanks to one of the animals on their home world] and live for a very long time causing some other species to believe that they are 'immortal' and this has caused many races to go after the Changeling to discover their 'secrets'. Their species is quite close to the time lords as they oversee nature and make sure everything is kept in a balance. They don't like to interfere unless they have to and despise fighting and will try to avoid it at all costs. The Changelings are a peaceful lot and are one with nature; their home world 'Aeden' which translates as beauty is a haven; unsoiled by technology or pollution. There are few buildings as they enjoy sleeping amongst nature in their small family groups and tribes. The one major building on their world is the high castle where the royal family lives; these few Changelings were appointed because of their pure bloodline and their ancestry to the guardians who gave their lives to save their race occupation | Kadey has had many lives and many jobs, she has been in the army [out of curiosity to how humans fight], she's been a doctor, a singer, a policeman, a shop worker, a student, a delivery woman, a linguistic, an office worker, a baker, a butcher, a hunter, a professional babysitter the list goes on but you wouldn't find any of these on her CV as she is now a completely new person. She is currently unemployed but has worked in a top of the range fashion shop and is currently searching for something new [i'm thinking of having her join Torchwood 3 as the alien expert]
family information | FATHER: Brintal Tai Sali-yull/3956 | Kadey gets along with her father very well and its fair to say that she is defiantly 'a daddy's girl' as the humans would say. It's because of her love and devotion to her father that she is hear on Earth. Her father is the High King and his life was being threatened by a rival Malac Ravana who believed that Brintal had stolen the women he loved and because Kadey was the next in line she knew that as long as she was alive her father would be safe so she fled her home world to this world in order to protect her father. Her father understands her more so then her mother and has taught her a lot in life and the 200 years that Kadey has been here have been hard as she misses her father dearly.
MOTHER: Ya'Lina Van Ker-Sali-yull./3947 | Kadey and her mother do get along; just not all the time. Her mother believed Kadey was too free spirited and had to calm herself in order to be a good Queen when Brintal passed down the crown, but Kadey is who she is and the two often argued about this fact. But Kadey does love her mum and is saddened to be apart from her and often worries about how her mum is doing and if she is safe.
BROTHER: Natyal Fais Sali-yull/836 | Kadey's elder brother is a treat and a half, when they were younger he would always tease her and wind her up just like big brothers do. But despite their bickering and the fact that he used to annoy her so much the two are very close and Kadey knows that Natyal would do anything to protect her and its hard to be away from him. Natyal always looked out for her even when they fought and it feels strange to not have him watching over her. Her brother was meant to be the next in line but he gave up his rights when he found a different calling and decided to be the Keeper of stories and legends and he alone knows the full contents of the prophecy which is the only thing which gives the Changelings hope in the renewing of their world.
FIANCÉE: Straloch Chahandra/ 800 | Kadey's best friend turned fiancée the two were inseparable since the day they met. They did everything together and would often pull pranks. The two cared deeply for one another and it was no surprise to anyone else when Straloch asked Kadey to be his eternal mate. She of course was surprised at first but soon realised she also felt the same way. Being apart from him is probably the most painful because of their deep connection, not just emotionally and physically, the bond they share goes deep into their inner most being, deeper then their very souls and she struggles with the thought that she may not see him for a long time. She is completely devoted to him and although she worries at times that he may have given up on her she knows deep down that their love is eternal. residence | Currently Kadey lives in Cardiff, Wales and if you look at her birth records which were made by a very good friend of hers it would say she is a born and raised Welshwoman. But the truth is she was born on a planet far away called Aeden and she lived there for 600 years before coming to Earth and living on it's strange planet for the past 200 years. Her home on Aeden was one of tranquillity and she lived within the Castle where everything she could possibly need was there for her. But she preferred the outdoors and would often stay outside rather then sleep within the comfort of her own bed.
physical description | Eyes: Kadey has lovely brown/hazel eyes that lighten to a light brown almost golden colour when she's changing her shape. Her natural eye colour is golden; like that of an eagle and they seem to dance when she is happy. Her eyes are one of her best features are are rather big and are the first thing people tend to notice about her. They are a lovely oval shape and they seem to flick out at the end which is more notable when she is smiling.
-Hair: Kadey's hair is long and is as soft as silk. Her hair is a gorgeous brown with slight gingery streaks in it which gives it a lovely autumn look. Because Kadey's hair is easy to manage, she finds she can easily style it in any way she wants. Whether that's straight or curly. But it does take a lot of work, but it's well worth it in her opinion, however she is wild at heart and tends to leave her hair lying naturally in it's off wavy style.
-Skin: Kadey has fair skin which she completely and utterly hates about herself. She's very conscious about it and often looks at those with darker skin with pure and utter envy. She'd love to be able to have a nice tan, but for some reason she doesn't tan well. She could of course change her appearance and make her skin darker but she has found that with her current appearance it wouldn't work; besides her skin is like this naturally so it would be useless to try and fool herself into believing otherwise.
-Body: Kadey has a nice thin figure, but not too thin. She's not size 0 like some 'celebrities'. Instead she's a nice 'cheerleader' sort of thin. She has curves in the right places, the only thing about her body she doesn't like is her knees. They're a bit 'misshaped' in her opinion and her knees [along with her feet] cure slightly more in wards then normal people. Kadey stands at around 6 feet and is a nice and healthy weight of 126 pounds. This current appearance of hers is the closest one to her true appearance give or take a few changes like eye colour, teeth, lip shape and her physical height.
-Distinguishable features: On her left arm she has what some people might think is a tatoo, but really its a special mark that she got when in Aeden. It is the mark of the forest, those who have it are known as 'friends of the forest'. On earth it would be a mixture between the army and the RSPCA. Those who have the mark are sworn to protect nature, which can sometimes mean killing those that are harming it. Each mark is different and Kadey's one is a vine that spirals up part of her arm. The vine has leaves and thorns on it and is usually a deep brown colour. However, if trouble is near, it will turn a deep black and become irratant. If Kadey ignores the danger the mark will grow bigger played by | Katie Holmes
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- Calm.
Like most of her species Kadey has a calm and cool exterior and is slow to anger. It took her years of training to be able to maintain this level of calmness. But this doesn't mean she doesn't act on what she is passionate about. If she feels her life or the life of nature is in danger she will do whatever she can to save it. In tough situations rather than going in guns blazing she does her best to keep a cool demeanour and think through what it is she is doing and then act using her clear head to outwit her opponents and ensure her survival. She is a very peaceful person and doesn’t enjoy fighting and would much rather stay in the sidelines protecting those she cares about then actually fighting someone and causing them harm. This can be seen in the majority of her species as they don’t like to shed unnecessary blood and although she is on a different planet with different rules she still believes in peace and this level of calamity seems to radiate from her to other people; occasionally calming even the most temperate of people and making them think clearly. Some people find her level of peace and calm a bit nerving and unnatural and this can make them feel uncomfortable at times but there is nothing Kadey can do; she isn’t human and she never will be..
- Loyal.
If anything can be said for Kadey it’s that she is loyal and would do anything to protect those who are close to her. She’s like a dog to its master who follows its master wherever they go and defends them and their property. Kadey doesn’t exactly follow her friends around at their heels but she keeps an eye on them and looks out for them. If she feels they are in danger she’ll go out of her way to protect them and watch over them. Of course doing this would cause her to come across as a stalker and a freak so she uses her gift to keep an eye on them ensuring that they are safe without freaking them out. She will always be there for her friends and family and if it were necessary she would put her life on the line if it meant keeping them alive; which is the whole reason why she is here on Earth. Sometimes her loyalty can get her in trouble and cause more harm than good and make some people think that she feels they can’t stand up for themselves or protect themselves; but it’s not Kadey’s intention to make them feel like this, she just wants to keep them safe. But her loyalty doesn’t just stop there, she is great at keeping secrets and anything that her friends want her to keep to herself she will; after all she has her own secrets and would hate for anyone to start spreading them around so it wouldn’t be right for her to spread the secrets her friends had.
- Secretive.
Kadey can be a very secretive person and isn’t one to open her life story to people; and rightly so. She’s not human and never will be and her life has been long and complex and with the fear that surrounds aliens thanks to species like the Daleks, the Sycorax, the 456 and many others she knows that revealing what she truly is would cause more harm than good. But that isn’t the only reason why she is so secretive; the man who she is hiding from could be on Earth already for all she knew and could be any tom dick or harry wandering the streets so keeping her secret to herself is a way of ensuring that she remains safe. If she were to reveal her secret and it turned out to be Malcan or her secret became public and Malcan somehow found out then the lives of her family, her own and maybe even the innocent and fragile human lives around her would be in danger. So she feels that it’s better to keep her mouth shut. This of course can annoy people especially when they open up to her and reveal their own dark secrets and pains and she stays closed, but her mind is made up.
- Trust issues.
She has a few trust issues and isn’t sure who is trustworthy and who isn’t. So far she has only found one person in her life that she can trust with her secret and be herself around and despite his loyalty to her she often fears that he may let something slip out or suddenly decide to reveal all to the world. She believes that this distrust may be something more deep rooted then a simple fear of being revealed; ever since the events in the past which caused her kind to both hate and fear humans there has been a great distrust of other species especially Earthlings and what may happen if they ever stumble upon Aeden again; and despite seeing that humans aren’t the monsters that were depicted in the stories that fear seems to still be there and Kadey thinks that some of her distrust is down to the stories of those terrible years; causing her to be cautious and safe. But Kadey isn’t entirely sure what it is that causes her to have trust issues but she sees it as a good thing; it protects her heart and keeps her safe and after all the pain she has endured on Earth she feels that it is for the best.
- Curious.
Although she has been on Earth for a while now and has learned a lot since coming here she is still very curious about human life and fascinated by what they have been able to accomplish. She finds things like televisions, mobile phones and the internet extremely fascinating and is always curious to try and understand how it works. This curiosity can cause her a lot of trouble and the phrase ‘curiosity killed the cat’ has applied to Kadey more then she would like to admit. Her curious nature about human life and in general has put her in a few tight spots; for example she was curious what area 51 was and decided to take a look and barely escaped capture. She does try and be as cautious as possible but sometimes she just wants to explore and can’t help but dive into a world unknown and satisfy her need to know more. She has yet to find a good and safe balance and part of her hopes she doesn’t because despite the danger she puts herself in she finds it exciting.
- Stubborn.
Headstrong, determined, persistent. Call it what you will, they all apply to her if she’s perfectly honest. She can be very narrow-minded and if she puts her mind on something you will have a hard time shifting her from it. She can almost be like a stubborn child who wants sweets and won’t take no for an answer. Kadey knows what she likes and what she wants and if there is something she feels she must do or say then no one can stop her; this also applies to what she doesn’t want to do. If someone asks her to do something she feels uncomfortable with she sure as hell won’t do it. For example if she were to ever join the military again [and she’s never planning on doing that after the trauma of being there] and a gun was put in her hand and she was asked to kill someone and she didn’t want to do it then she would stick to her decision. Even if she had a gun pointed to her head she would still stick to her decisions. This can be very frustrating for people and Kadey sometimes feels bad for making people put up with her stubborn nature but she doesn’t want to be something she’s not and doesn’t want to turn away from who she truly is, so even if her stubborn nature means losing a few friends she’d rather that then give up on what she believes.
- Closed off.
Don’t make this think that she isn’t a loving and open person because she is; but she guards her heart carefully and has decided to have very few friends and to keep the majority of them at arm’s length with the exception of Nathan Garner. She lives longer than humans and has to change who she is every few years which means having to say goodbye to people she cares about and start a new life. She has watched and heard of so many people she cares about growing old and dying whilst she wanders the world continuing on with the same pattern and it has become quite painful for her. To outlive people you had shared some good memories with is a pain that is indescribable and she has come to the conclusion that the less she bonds with someone the easier it will be to say goodbye to them.
- Mischievous
Imagine you are tying your shoes and your kitten comes along and undoes them and starts playing with the string. Well this is what Kadey can be like at times; she is very playful and mischievous and enjoys a good prank as long as it doesn’t cause someone harm. She is still young for her age and is on the borderline of true adulthood so she still has a childlike nature about her. She wants to have as much fun as possible and doesn’t enjoy sitting around and doing nothing; she is a very active person and will do whatever it takes to see her friends smile even if it’s at the expense of someone else. But she isn’t the sort of person to create mischief and not like some in return; in fact she welcomes the challenge. She used to cause mischief back on Aeden and doesn’t see why she shouldn’t do the same on Earth. She knows when it is appropriate to cause a bit of fun and mischief and when to be serious so you don’t have to worry about her not taking thing seriously; she just wants to make sure people have fun and that her friends are happy even in the most difficult times in life.
- Intellegent
Her species is a very insightful and intelligent species and can pick up clues from the way a person stands to their smell. IQ isn’t something that really exists on Aeden as intellect isn’t measured in the same way as it is on Earth because the majority of her species is intelligent; some more than others. Kadey is seen as just above average and is more insightful then intelligent but here on Earth her IQ would be around 138, give or take a few. But she doesn’t always use her intelligence and prefers to have fun then sit at home filling her head with more knowledge and solving puzzles. But her intellect is more fixed on the matters and subjects of her home world; technology is still a mystery to her and some of the things here on Earth baffle and confuse her. But her intellect has helped keep her alive and on her feet and has enabled her to experience challenging and fun jobs like her years as a doctor. People are often surprised by her intelligence as she isn’t one for showing it; mainly because she doesn’t want to show off or cause people to think she feels she is above them. She likes the fact she is intelligent and has occasionally used it to solve little mysteries but she would never use her intelligence to put down anyone or make them feel stupid. She still has a lot to learn about Earth culture and their way of life but she knows enough to know that no one likes a show off.
greatest fear | There are two things she fears, one is her own fear and one is a 'built in' fear that all Changelings have. She fears being discovered and has been very careful over the years to ensure that this doesn't happen as she is worried about what might happen if she is discovered to be an alien and doesn't like the thought of being experimented on. The fear that she which is built in is cages. Her kind are meant to be free to roam and being locked in a cage or prison of some sorts slowly turns them in an empty shell. At first they become desperate to come out and seem unable to shift, after that their mind starts to break as they become 'tame' and after a while they loose the will to live and slowly but surely they become so broken that they are no longer themselves. It is the worst punishment given to her people and she fears that if discovered this might be her fate. greatest desire | Naturally Kadey's greatest desire is to return home and to once again be with Straloch and to live the life she is meant to live and get married and have her own family. She doesn't like being alone; Changelings are best in groups so its hard for her to be on Earth and despite growing attached to the planet and its strange ways she is still determined to get back home and be with her family. personal treasure | Kadey treasures two things in her life; her family which now includes Straloch as her betrothed because family is something that lasts, there is a connection there that cannot be broken or replaced. Her other personal treasure is her connection to nature, its something that she finds hard to explain to her human friend Nathan who knows who she truly is. She is one with nature and feels its pain and doesn't like senseless killing or destruction of a life. biggest secret | To the humans that she surrounds herself with her biggest secret would be that she isn't human and is in fact an alien and this is something she feels is very important to keep to herself. As for secrets she holds with her own people her biggest secret would be that she ignored her duty to spend time with her friends. best memory | When Straloch proposed to her. It was her happiest moment ever and she cannot wait until she is able to return to him. He's her best friend and she can't think of anyone else she'd rather spend her life with. He proposed to her in the Makowi falls, one of the most beautiful places on her home world and a favourite spot for them. worst memory | Kadey has many memories which she'd put into this category, leaving her home is defiantly in this list because of how painful it was to leave, but her years on Earth have meant she has had many things to cause her great grief, there was the time when she was in the army and forced to kill a family which she knew was innocent; thus creating a deep hatred for the army and guns, and another memory she'd put in this category was when she was under the name Chrissie Jacobs and was a babysitter, one night she was looking after her friends young boy when a creature from another dimension slipped through and took the child. She saw it happen and has no idea if the child is alive and was blamed for what happened. She feels terribly guilty about the event and it has haunted her ever since.
history |Born in Aeden; the planet of beauty to Brintal and Ya'Lina Sali-yull, Kadey was given blessings for being born to the royal line. Her brother Natyal would be king but Kadey never minded. She loved her brother and didn't really care about ruling over Aeden. Unfortunatly, her brother had other plans. He was interested in legends and prophecies. So he became the keeper of legends, and it was announcenced that Kadey was the new heir.
It didn’t take Kadey long to learn her abilities. Not wishing to be separate from those who weren’t royal she went to a public school and met Straloch Chahandra. The two instantly became best friends and between learning to fully control their abilities and learning how to use them in a good way. They went around performing pranks and soon became quite well known for it. Once Kadey left school she went on to be trained in the laws of the land, learning how everything had a balance and how as the heir she not only had to protect her people, but the creatures that inhabited it as well.
She had learnt about Earth and how it was dangerous and a forbidden place to go. She’d been told the story that years ago, when the world first began there was a wormhole between Aeden and Earth, the humans soon got in contact with them and they became close. But soon the earthlings began to crave power, they started to hunt and kill Changelings in order to find a way to gain their ability to change their form. Fearing for their lives and suffering because of the large amount of deaths; The Eight Guardian Changelings cut them off and turned back time; this of course caught the attention of the Time Lords and the two races came to distrust one another. Sadly though the process wasn't a total success and a small crack still remained and as the act had caused the Guardians to die no one knew where or how big this crack was. But of course, there were decendants of those eight. One of which was Kadey, so if ever needed she was told she held the power to unlock the barrier, along with the other seven who were decendants..
Kadey then decided to join the friends of the forest, and after many years she was able to become one, and she was branded as a friend. Kadey loved being part of the forest guardians group and would often go on many missions when called to do so. After all, the curse of the war so long ago had been hard on their world, and darkness had begun to fall on their peaceful planet.
Danger then struck in the form of Malcan Ravana, and old friend of Kadey's father, driven by jealousy towards his old friend he began trying to kill him. Kadey soon learnt from her father that Malcan had wanted to wed her mother, and that when she had chosen her father, Malcan had blamed him and had sworn revenge. Brintal revealed that if he was killed, Malcan would kill Kadey in order to take over Aeden. Deciding the only way to save Aeden was to hide, Kadey decided to go to Earth, her parents were fearful but knew it would be the only place she'd be able to hide. Just as she was about to leave; Straloch confessed his love for her and proposed. Overcome with joy Kadey accepted and promised that when she returned they would wed.
Arriving on earth Kadey quickly realised that no earthlings had her ability. So she kept it hidden. Acquiring a passport and everything else that was needed to be counted as a normal earthling, she took up a job in a clothes store and soon got accustomed to their way of life and soon got comfortable living on earth with it’s simple ways. Kadey met many people on Earth and had many friends, but because she aged slower then them she often had to leave them behind and create fake death for herself. She constantly changed her name and appearance and made sure to never be detected. So far she's been on Earth for 200 years. There is only one person who knows her true identity and that is Nathan Garner or 'Gadget' as he sometimes goes by. Kadey used to go to him to get new identities and eventually he began to suspect she wasn't who she said she was and after a long time she decided to trust him and revealed who she was. The two are very close and she has even taught him some of her language.
The first few years that Kadey was on earth was hard. She didn't understand the language so she spent a few years as various different animals and travelled through each country and listened closely to the Earthlings words. Pretty soon she was able to speak fluent English, but not just that but French, Spanish, German, Italian, Russian, Chinese, Japenese and many others. But she prefered the English language so she moved over to America under a false name.
Deciding it would be good, she gave herself the apperance of a child and progressed through school, it was an interessting experience for her and she found it amusing but not without it difficulties, it was her first real time interacting with humans and sometimes wasn't sure what to say and there was a natural anger and distrust of them but eventually she warmed to the life she was living and soon made many friends. .
After that she then went on to becoming a doctor and at first found it very hard; she knew very little of the human body and it took her a while to learn it to a stage which was required. But her real problem was with the technology and often got confused by it but found herself successful with the other aspects, she saw it as a way to harness some of her power without being caught. But because she didn't age like everyone else she had to move a lot, and finally she decided to create her own death. It was hard for her because she'd made so many friends but she knew it be the only way.
She then created a whole new her but decided not to go through the school process again. Instead she used various things and adapted her appearance and created a new name. 'Sandrea Turner'. After having a taste of the medicine life she decided it would be interessting to go into acting. So that's what she did. And she found it extremely fun but very difficult especially with all the attention. she could hardly breath without someone knowing about it and after a few years she knew that this life wasn't safe for her and had to stage a new death.
Then came Mia Andrews, a sweet little blonde girl who lived in France. Kadey had decided that a new country was the best idea for her. So as Mia she worked with the RSPCA and helped look after animals. This was by far her favourite job because she got to spend some much time with animals. It did hurt her to see them in such pain, but it did give her a piece of her home back.
A few years later she moved to another country and 'lost' contact with her friends. She then decided to travel for a few years and see the world properly. It also gave her a chance to use her abilities and live among various animals. One of which was a wolf... that was her favourite time, she loved running wild with a pack and hunting for the young pups. The travelling also gave her a chance to fufil her role as 'Friend of the Forest' and she helped save a lot of animals and forests.
Deciding to return to civilisation, she heard about a war that was going on and decided to join. Training was hard but she got through and soon regretted her choices; having to kill people was very difficult for her and she felt that the war was unnecessary but could understand the thoughts behind it. One of the worst incidences she faced was when she had to kill a family with young children; she knew they were innocent and hated having to follow those orders but felt she had little choice . When she returned home she was given a few medals... which she still has hidden away in her home but decided after that to never pick up a gun again.
She then killed herself off again and soon became quite depressed. She'd experienced quite a lot. And news of those she'd once known dying hurt her. For some she attended the funeral and simply said she was a friend or a relative and silently mourned her lost friend. Death wasn't something she was used to because of Changelings living so long. But she knew she had to carry on, because she could never age like those around her.
Tired of life that got her too noticed, she moved to England and began working in a shop. She was unimportant and unknown, and although she had friends, there weren't a lot. Which meant she was saved from any pain she might have felt when she lost them. But working in a shop soon bored her and she quit and started working as a waitress. It wasn't glamerous but it held a bit of fun and for a while she enjoyed it.
But she was soon set for pain again, a friend of hers had a young child. And every so often she'd look after her. One time, Kadey [or Chrissie as she was known] was looking after her friend's son. She felt uneasy and felt something was wrong. After hearing him cry like he'd never cried before she ran up to the little boy's room. Only to see blood on the floor and the little girl being dragged into what could only be described as a portal. Kadey's friend blamed her and said that Kadey had killed her son out of jealousy, so Kadey made herself disappear, but she swore to one day find that little boy and return her home.
And so it continued, Kadey kept living and dying and becoming someone new. Each persona brought new adventures and more hardship. And bit by bit kadey began to wonder if she'd ever get to go home. She knew she could only return once Malcan was dead. But sadly he wasn't and she could risk returning. So she had to stay. She did often wonder if Straloch had moved on, but in her heart she was convinced he wouldn't. He loved her too much.
Kadey then kept her first name of 'Kadey Sewell' and stayed in London, after the battle of Canary Warf she pondered on wether or not to move again. And when Harold Saxon came she decided it would be best. Though she found it horrible that everyone forgot 'the year' with him. And because of what she was she could remember. But she tried to forget it herself, and by the time she moved to Cardiff, it was just another background memory for her to occasionaly think about
For a few years she lived in Cardiff. And since living there she's had a few strange encounters with other aliens. She's came to the conclusion that there might be a wormhole or a rift running through Cardiff. And set to work to finding where it is, and hopefully closing it. She worried that the rift might bring through Malcan. And knows that if it did, disaster will strike But she never found it, so Kadey gave up and tried to live a normal life. She got a job in a shop and made a good comfortable life. When the 456 struck she left her job at the shop and tried to investigate what was going on as this species was unknown to her and clearly dangerous. She never fully found out what had happened and the only thing she heard was that a group called Torchwood had put an end to the 456. She has heard a lot about this group and knows they have knowledge of alien life and fears them greatly, she feels that an encounter with them might cause her difficulties because they may see her like all the rest.
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Post by Kadey Sewell on Aug 18, 2010 2:40:34 GMT -8
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Post by Administration on Aug 24, 2010 13:58:38 GMT -8
There are a few things that need to be added and changed. First of all, you didn't put her sexuality, or her biggest secret. Also, she seems to be good at way too many things. I understand she would have experienced a great deal, but that doesn't mean she would have been successful at everything she tried. Kadey needs faults and weaknesses if her species is going to be that powerful. It also surprises me that she hadn't heard of Torchwood before, consider that even the citizens of Cardiff have heard of it. Mostly, I would say try to make her a bit less perfect. She's a wonderful character, but we don't want her to end up a Mary-Sue. As for her being an Alien Specialist, that could work. Plus her shape shifting abilities could also be useful. Fix this and then I'll take another look.
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Post by Kadey Sewell on Aug 27, 2010 13:30:57 GMT -8
Edited it, i hope thats okay
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